Whoa...
Jump out at me crazy! I liked it, had a nice fast beat, and some pretty intense songs. Somethings sounded a little odd though...
-The snare that has a triple hit or something. Every once and a while, i hear an odd beat on the snare. Not too bad, but odd still.
-The main melody really hurts my ears. It wasnt horrible, and i liked the melody it took. However, it was still a bit of a pain.
The GOOD SIDE!
-The drum's were awesome. The beats were very nicely put down, and it gave a very nice "hurry up!" feeling.
-Some arps (?) that you might have used. Whatever was gated also gave the nice effect of "hurry up!!!"
So, it needs a bit of work, but nothing really should be changed. You did fine! 9/10 and 5/5.
Good work here. :)